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Hey everyone me and my friend are writing a original story called Khaos Wars. We have posted three parts on DA so far and we were hoping some of you could read it and become beta readers. This is the first story we have ever written so hope you like it. 
"Summary of the stoty: One random schoolday Koizumi Aika is approached by the class president Moriyama Emiko who is adored by everyone... except Aika. Unfortunately ignoring Emiko's warnings will cost everyone dearly. Nothing could have prepared Aika for what the cruel hand of fate had in stock for her.
Should you listen to your heart, or follow your pre-determined path? What is really worth fighting for? And who will be the last ones standing in a world on fire?
A story about love, war, chaos, betrayal and leaning to understand one another despite of our differences."
"Summary of the stoty: One random schoolday Koizumi Aika is approached by the class president Moriyama Emiko who is adored by everyone... except Aika. Unfortunately ignoring Emiko's warnings will cost everyone dearly. Nothing could have prepared Aika for what the cruel hand of fate had in stock for her.
Should you listen to your heart, or follow your pre-determined path? What is really worth fighting for? And who will be the last ones standing in a world on fire?
A story about love, war, chaos, betrayal and leaning to understand one another despite of our differences."
The new summary:
16 years ago, the people of planet Cronos fought a terrible war against a merciless foe; the cronians survived, but their home was left in ruins. To this day the consecuenses of the war are still tormenting the people of Cronos. And if nothing changes they will all perish.
Meanwhile, 16 year old Aika from planet Earth is desperatly trying to cling to her normal life. Nothing has been the same since the day she woke up with a strange bracelet on her arm. The bracelet gave her the ability to transform into a magical girl. Luckily there are four other girls just like her, and together they have to fight mysterious monsters that have been showing up from nowhere.
In a twist of fate Aika meets and falls in love with a boy, Kazu from Cronos, who seems to have a special connection with the monsters. Soon she realizes that the monsters aren't the only threat to humanity
16 years ago, the people of planet Cronos fought a terrible war against a merciless foe; the cronians survived, but their home was left in ruins. To this day the consecuenses of the war are still tormenting the people of Cronos. And if nothing changes they will all perish.
Meanwhile, 16 year old Aika from planet Earth is desperatly trying to cling to her normal life. Nothing has been the same since the day she woke up with a strange bracelet on her arm. The bracelet gave her the ability to transform into a magical girl. Luckily there are four other girls just like her, and together they have to fight mysterious monsters that have been showing up from nowhere.
In a twist of fate Aika meets and falls in love with a boy, Kazu from Cronos, who seems to have a special connection with the monsters. Soon she realizes that the monsters aren't the only threat to humanity
Hi there,
I'm a member and a watcher, but I do not have the option of contributing; am I doing something incorrect?
I'm a member and a watcher, but I do not have the option of contributing; am I doing something incorrect?
You're not doing anything incorrect- this group has some little errors in how contributing goes. I'll do my best to fix it once I can, but unfortunately I'm unable to get on much. You can probably expect to see the errors fixed within a month, please be patient and thank you for being a part of LiteratureHideout.
Hi, I'm not exactly new here but I am trying to revamp my poetry, any criticism would be really appreciated. Thanks guys!
I'll gladly critique your poetry! Message me whenever you write a new one, 'kay? ~GlitteringStars
Excuse me, I'm new un the group and I feel a bit lost ^^' I wish share some of my short stories here, but I dont know if it allows submit only poetry, if you have to ask permission someone before submit something... I'm a bit lost. I have sent a message to the creator's group but he couldn't read it yet. Could someone help me please?
Thanks for your attention ^^
Thanks for your attention ^^